burninhell

Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! I'll definitely look back over the description and flow of the piece and correct anything that I spot. In this first chapter ...

Hi! Thank you so much for your review! I completely see what you mean by most of those points, and I'll definitely try to develop the characters a little more ...

Hi! Thank you so much for your review! I completely see what you mean by most of those points, and I'll definitely try to develop the characters a little more ...

Hi, thank you so much for this review! I'll definitely try and add a little more description into the next chapter! Thanks for pointing it out to me :) I'm ...

Also, welcome to YWS!!!! :)

Omg, yes! You should totally do that!!! Let me know if you do, I'd love to read it! :)

Yep, I'll be quicker next time :P

Hey, thank you so much for your review!!! I'll make sure to bare all your comments in mind when writing later chapters. :) Thank you

Awww, you're so sweet :) And you should totally do that!!! It would be amazing!!!!

Hey! Thank you so much for this. I'll definitely make those changes. My grammar isn't the best, so thank you for pointing all of those out to me. And yas, ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! Thank you so much for your review, it's definitely helped :) I'll make sure to take a look at the first sentence, I'm thinking I might ...

Kay :P

I loved this! I personally have misophonia and I think that this poem represents how it feels to perfection. This is exactly how it feels to me anyways, and your ...

Yay! I can't wait :)

Hey! This helps so much, I can completely see what you mean, it needs reworking anyways, but thank you so much for helping me notice what I need to focus ...