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That's soo good!!! I really enjoyed it! I like how it changes on the last two lines, tell your friend she's done a good job!! Oh, and welcome to YWS!!! ...

Thank you! =-D And Classy, I know it doesn't really seem like a prolouge, but it will when the first chapter comes. =-D Okay, well, thanks again, I'll write some ...

Thank you!!! =-D I'm just about to start on the first chapter soon, so I'll let you know when it's up!!! =-D Maybe then, you'll still be screaming "more, more, ...

OMG!=) That's soooooo good! I want to no more! =) tall me more! =) Write more please. I love how it describes Leo! =) =) I want to no more! ...

wow, that was pretty good. the only thing i saw was be sure you captilize (spelling=P) the first letter of every sentence. I really liked, now I'm going to go ...

Thanks everyone! I will deffinetly fix some of those things. And as of right now, I'm thinking of it to become a story, but I got to get time. Thanks ...

She was no longer the Rosaline Radley Jared and her sister once knew; she was now a heartbroken soul, lost in a big city. There should be a coma between ...

Wow. that's really cool! I love that! I hope you write more. I can't thank of anything that was bad. not even a mistake. Good job! keep writeing!

that was great! I really enjoyed it! I love how the emotions just shine of it! It was truely amazing! I love how Camron tells Isaac where she goes. that ...

thank you. I will fix some of those mistakes. Yes, she was ment to sound a bit selffish. I think Jett got the piont of the passage. thank you all.

wow! I like it! I love how you describe the characters and there fellings! Keep writeing, and good luck!

Wow, that's two stories in a row that has almost made me cry. Tha means that you're a really good writer, or I'm just being all toachy and feely. I ...

You almost made me cry! That was amazing! I really love it!

That is great! I love the books, but that is so funny!

Oh my gosh! That was amazing! Please write more! My tummy is all tied up from reading such a great story! PM me when you get more please!!!