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[throttles the poem] Talk about driving me crazy. I love it, but I cant stop picking at it. Argh!

I dont know when this one happened, Mesh, so I cant add to your theory of bubbles-writing-better-when-she's-out-of-her-head-with-exhaustion-ish-ness-whatever...LOL. Which, you know, is really...I'm no

Random editing time! Whee! Drowned you were dead and gone before I found you sprawled in a Romantic heap on the sand (but still dead). I tried to breathe some ...

My dear Snoink, really, there is no need to lecture. I said it sounds very Biblical; not that it was . By which I mean, it sounds very sententious and ...

For your age, this is fantastic. I know I've already posted but I just had to come back and read it again... :cry: I still cry with each word!!!

:oops: :oops: :oops: lizk thazxn! :lol: :lol: 8)

I've told you this already but I had to say it again - superb. The flow of the story was just magical. I'll have to check out more of your ...

thatsl zo COAL you fuz are awedm. Thax! :D EDIT: LMZao you callex me BUBBLEWARPED...I tnkz it fiz ;)

k3pt - I wouldnt like to be where you're from. I like lots of originality in my pudding, thanks ;)

I, too, have heard it before. And I'm half a world away from xantham, so...would you care to explain? :?

Was looking through my old poems and decided to re-edit this... Mannequin Made of white elastic and a kind of vacant dignity a girl with long hair (whose original colour ...

ROTFLMAO. You rock TBR. I'm going to start a SAVE THE HOTDOGIANS organization now O:) :lol:

What is a dying cliche? Do you mean, did "I" die in the end of the poem? If so, no. What I meant was that self-mutliation (i.e. hurting myself) could ...

Wow. I truly dont think there's anything I can say to that, but I will try anyway: Perfect.

OK, thanks for all the help guys! Here's an edited version - Intellectual Barbie 2.0: Here I am; make me pretty, make me shine like city lights and polished steel. ...