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Books: Harry Potter. They may be a dime a dozen but hell if they're not better writing. Tolkein was a long-winded jackass, I'm sorry to say, and while the story ...

Never mind Incandescence (I can see he's his usual pleasant self), personally I reckon this poem is really something. Sure, its not perfect (what poem is?) but I certainly dont ...

Gotta love David Bowie. And Labyrinth :D Have to say though, as a poem this one kinda leaves me cold. The last line is the only line with any power ...

Wow Firestarter, you've really improved in leaps and bounds since I was here. And you werent half bad then lol. Kudos mate. I love this poem. You've really got the ...

I like this. I do. Some lines have too many syllables, but the ending is good, blunt and very direct. I like the images, too, the way you explain things ...

Superb. Magic. I LOVE this poem. The images are truly echoes of the poetic Sublime and your rhythm is perfect. I'm gushing, but hey, aint it great to be appreciated? ...

I loved it - except for the last line. I hate the last line. Get rid of it. Change it. DO SOMETHING WITH IT BEFORE I GO CRAZY....ok, I'm sane ...

Wow hekategirl I have to say you've REALLY HUMUNGOUSLY improved since I was last year. Oh, wait. That doesnt really sound like a compliment, does it? But it is! You're ...

I'm surprised at the lackluster reviews this poem is getting- I really enjoyed it. Particularly the last stanza. It all flowed wonderfully. Sometimes I find your poems a little hard ...

I agree with Chanson- the last verse makes the whole piece. I love the way you mix French in with the English. It gives it the perfect flavour. In fact, ...

Hm. I must have been in a bad mood when I first read this coz for some reason I didnt like it - but on second reading I think its ...

Far be it for me to be deliberately cruel, but I have to be blunt. While I am sorry for your loss and dont mean to belittle your feelings, so ...

:shock: LOVE the poem. Seriously. Its unique, its sweet, its lovely. I especially liked the way you worded everything so simply, and the unique rhyme scheme you used. Absolutely beautiful. ...

personal reaction was overwhelmingly "Huh?!". It just seems like a random collection of words and images to me. You have a nice rhythm and I like your style, but there's ...

Hey rachel. Thanks for your review of my poem, "Only Human". Thought I'd check out some of your work :D For something off the top of your head, this isnt ...