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Hi Howler, I really enjoyed this; it has a compelling rhythm, and the subject and tone were quite unique, making a refreshing change of pace from the other poems I've ...

Hi ireylcadence, I quite enjoyed this poem. You have a great feel for rhythm and the rhyme scheme - while a little stretched in places - was neat and quick, ...

Hi Jasmine Hart, I'd forgotten how much I enjoy your poetry :) I really liked this: the tone was taunting but still direct, and I was intrigued from the first ...

Hi Invisible Mann, I have to say, I quite liked this: the concept of "property in the sky" and someone trying to sell it to an uninterested buyer was quite ...

Hi GildedLily, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get acquainted with the other members: I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you :) Re: your poem ...

Hi itsaslowfade, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get acquainted with the other members; I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you :) Re: your poem ...

Hi nicchaos, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to post some reviews and get acquainted with the other members. I'm sure they'll all be pleased to meet you :) Re: your ...

Hi icanbefixed, You have a very interesting poem here. You obviously have a good grasp of line breaks and rhythm, and a strong message you want to put across. Unfortunately, ...

Hi nayex! I can see you're relatively new to YWS, so welcome :) It's always nice to see new 'faces' on the forums! Re: your poem, I can tell that ...

I like the ending of this piece; the penultimate stanza is a little preachy but there is some flourish in the last line. To be honest, though, the rest of ...

Welcome to YWS :) It's always nice to see some new faces in the poetry forums. Firstly, I have to say, regardless of the planned departure from the rhyme in ...

Firstly, thank you for rating this correctly :) It's good to see a new member who pays attention to the rules! As for the poem itself, I find it leaves ...

First, let me congratulate you on managing to keep the rhyming and rhythm so tidy. As Shadow points out, there are a couple of places where you've gone off a ...

Insofar as this is just for fun, it succeeds in bringing a smile to the reader's face and it has a lovely, lighthearted tone. I agree with GreatEscape about the ...

Hi there, Here's your review, as requested :) Firstly, while I liked the concept of the poem, it felt a little - what's the word? Abrupt? Shallow? I kind of ...