User avatar

bubblegum

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: His Every Order :: Chapter two

    Oh wow! Okay, I seriously enjoyed reading this review/reply/feedback-thingy! Not only did you point out things I haven't even thought of (such as how Cameron acted in what was supposed ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: His Every Order :: Summary & Chapter one

    Thank you so much! This helped a lot For the mature part, it's not really there yet, but it will develop throughout the story, so I guess I didn't need ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Luna Corman Novel, 1.1

    Thank you, both. That really helped, Other One. : )

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: X-City: Prologue,Chapter One, Chapter Two

    Joey got into his uniform for his summer job as an officer for the transportation unit. His friend Zack volunteered too . He looked at his reflection in a big ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: X-City: Prologue,Chapter One, Chapter Two

    Sorry, but I just made another post, instead of edit the other one. I find that a lot easier. The alarm on my bedside table beeped loudly. I sighed, swinging ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Orphanage ~

    Fortsett å skrive! :D Det skal jeg ^^ Thanks for reviewing, guys! :D

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part two

    Well, thanks a lot for the reviews, guys. I appreciate it. It's fun to read them too. I am curious to what others think of my story. I'll pm you, ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part two

    Hmm..everything is perfect so far, however you left me hanging. Did Robyn found her perfume yet or is that going to happen later? Thanks for reviewing, kind of ^^ Actually, ...

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bluffing - Chapter 4

    I love your story and I can't wait until you submit more! ^^ Keep up the good work.

    Mar 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part one

    *Review* Thanks. Again :) I will. And I'll edit that sentence right away..

    Mar 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Orphanage ~

    *Review* I will send you a pm when I post more. : ) I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad you didn't find anything wrong. Thanks.

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Flameshore

    This was really cute. I liked it. I look forward to read more. Tell me when you submit something, will you? : )

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Prologue [new~final]

    *Review* Was the girl out the same girl from beginning or she changes later to become Gwen? Nice Prologue, dear and you should continue it. you have major problem with ...

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Prologue [new~final]

    Here as requested. Sorry it took so long. I forgot about my wrff after nobody posted in it for like two weeks. *Review* ~Valentine That's okay. Thanks anyway : )

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Chapter one, part one [edited]

    *Review* =D Nice work! ~Peanut Thank you. : ) I'll rewrite it again as soon as possible.

    Mar 17, 2010


Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening