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Re: His Every Order :: Chapter two
Oh wow! Okay, I seriously enjoyed reading this review/reply/feedback-thingy! Not only did you point out things I haven't even thought of (such as how Cameron acted in what was supposed ...
Apr 20, 2017 -
Re: His Every Order :: Summary & Chapter one
Thank you so much! This helped a lot For the mature part, it's not really there yet, but it will develop throughout the story, so I guess I didn't need ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: A Luna Corman Novel, 1.1
Thank you, both. That really helped, Other One. : )
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: X-City: Prologue,Chapter One, Chapter Two
Joey got into his uniform for his summer job as an officer for the transportation unit. His friend Zack volunteered too . He looked at his reflection in a big ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: X-City: Prologue,Chapter One, Chapter Two
Sorry, but I just made another post, instead of edit the other one. I find that a lot easier. The alarm on my bedside table beeped loudly. I sighed, swinging ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: The Orphanage ~
Fortsett å skrive! :D Det skal jeg ^^ Thanks for reviewing, guys! :D
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part two
Well, thanks a lot for the reviews, guys. I appreciate it. It's fun to read them too. I am curious to what others think of my story. I'll pm you, ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part two
Hmm..everything is perfect so far, however you left me hanging. Did Robyn found her perfume yet or is that going to happen later? Thanks for reviewing, kind of ^^ Actually, ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Bluffing - Chapter 4
I love your story and I can't wait until you submit more! ^^ Keep up the good work.
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part one
*Review* Thanks. Again :) I will. And I'll edit that sentence right away..
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~
*Review* I will send you a pm when I post more. : ) I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad you didn't find anything wrong. Thanks.
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Flameshore
This was really cute. I liked it. I look forward to read more. Tell me when you submit something, will you? : )
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Prologue [new~final]
*Review* Was the girl out the same girl from beginning or she changes later to become Gwen? Nice Prologue, dear and you should continue it. you have major problem with ...
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Prologue [new~final]
Here as requested. Sorry it took so long. I forgot about my wrff after nobody posted in it for like two weeks. *Review* ~Valentine That's okay. Thanks anyway : )
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Chapter one, part one [edited]
*Review* =D Nice work! ~Peanut Thank you. : ) I'll rewrite it again as soon as possible.
Mar 17, 2010
