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I like it, but in some parts I was confused a bit... Maybe you should go through it and change some parts? But really, I did like it, very original. ...

Thanks people! I love you for loving my poem! I was hoping that this was something that could be felt and understood, if I got that reaction from you, than ...

I have blue eyes! I love this poem for the emotion it draws, good job!

It's no problem and I thank you.

I know, my bad, but it;s something I really feel, so it's all good.

Thanks cupcake, cute name by the way.

Thanks everybody! This poem, is VERY special to me. If some of you don't get it, let me explain. I have done a lot of things I regret, and still ...

WOW!!! I love it! I could never write anything like this. I'm a stickler for capitalization though, so that's the only thing I can find wrong with this. Otherwise, it's ...

I like it, it's something almost everyone could relate to but... It's missing something and some stanzas were hard for me to comprehend, which just might be me but I ...

Thanks everybody, I still don't like it but I'm happy some of you like it. Also, thanks for the tips, I'll probably have to edit it sometime, but right now ...

I really like it, it has some errors, and I'm not sure I like the rhythm, but I like it. If you just fixed the grammatical errors, I would love ...

Thanks everyone! And for the advice, thank you. I did change "say" to "heard" though, thank you again!

Thanks Annie! I really appreciate it, this poem means a lot to me, so thank you for liking it.

Thanks! I wasn't sure about this poem, but I'm glad you guys liked it. I only liked it, because it was something I really felt, and am just now getting ...

Thanks everbody! I loved writing this poem, afterwards, I felt so good. This poem, I wrote really did happen to me. A man I had fallen in love with (and ...