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brittlebones

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Depression

    Hi. I really loved this. In the beginning I had thought the entire poem would be about letting the sadness consume you and giving up, but then I was pleasantly ...

    Sep 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: i don't usually write happy poems

    This is so beautiful, so easy to relate to for those in love. The imagery is fantastic. The words, so simple yet so powerful, turned into a picture in my ...

    May 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Don't Know

    I like the criticism and confusion in this poem. The uncertainty of how you feel about yourself and your emotions. "I don't know a lot of things - including me." ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Memories or Nightmares?

    Beautiful. The anguish and inability to let yourself love is relatable and understandable. Lovely poem. You can feel the hurt and passion from it. The way you link your unwillingness ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: A Letter To My Angel

    This is a very passionate and emotional poem. I really like it, it is very easy to relate to. You can feel the reluctance in letting the person go since ...

    Apr 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I WonderLove

    This is a beautiful poem, extremely well phrased. So many emotions are portrayed: love, anger, fear and hate. You showed how love can heal as well as weaken and how ...

    Apr 22, 2016


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