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No I don't think your review helped at all in fact it just pissed me off. I know what im doing with my story and I do not need someone ...

Hey that was really good, but at the end make sure to but in my heart or something like that. Because my perverted side saw and it cracked up laughing. ...

I like the song alot I would have never heard it if didn't join choir thank you, you made my day!

Well I wrote this in school oneday and our teacher want us to write a story useing most of the lyrics so thats what I did.

For some reason when I read this it makes me think of a one night stand and a week later the girl finds out she is pregnet and the guy ...

Go a little slower next time, describe the surroundings a little more. I think its good keep up the good work, just make sure to slow down great things cant ...

So true... I think thats how most people feel, they can act like they love life but truely feel lost inside. You should keep up the good work.

Wow thats really good, keep it up!