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Hello wolf9599, I am Brittany and also from the green team :) here to review your poeticy :) lol I know that doesn't make sense. Now onto your poem. I ...

Brittany here to review. Wow that was messed up in the end. :( I think this poem is a sad work lol :) good punctuations and format but this part ...

Hello, brittany here to review. Good imagery, your the second person so far that has made me visualize what you say. I think it is good :) im not good ...

Well, my name is Brittany. :) I am here to review! For starters, I'm not quite understanding the point of this story. Honestly, for this to make sense, I think ...

Hello Danny, I am here to review you :) I think the poem is great:) and even though I can't relate to it at all, it still is very interesting. ...

Hey Scar. I'm doing this review to get a little better at it because I'm not to good right now. :D I think the poem has great imagery going throughout ...

Well, Im gonna try and do my 5th review. Anyways, I like the format of your poem, because it actually is in a poem form and looks way better than ...

:( that actually made me sad :,( but you did a good job :) very impressing.

Awww this is cute and sweet. Im just curious did you make this up or did you experience it??? PM me the answer because I might forget to check here ...

wow oh my god lol after I read that It made me cry,that was really sad to me. Lol can you PM me and give me some tips on how ...

lol omg this play is so cute yea a real day dream most likely to never come true. :) The only mistake I could find was how you spelled bungie ...

Hello,Im brittany :D Okay, i thought it was great for your first time writing a kissing scene lol it was like you wanted it and i really think thats all ...