briggsy1996

Hi there Brie! :) So, many things came to my mind as I was reading this, the first being: I think you did really well with putting your story in ...

Hi there! So I know you said in your spoiler that you wanted this story to be torn apart, but I need to say that I really, really enjoyed this. ...

Hi there! So, I've seen the picture of the falling man, and I knew as I was reading this that you had probably based it off of that picture! This ...

Hey there ; Like you, I was in kindergarten when the 9/11 took place. For this reason, I can relate entirely to your poem. It is well written, honest, and ...

Hey There, First off, this song really describes how I feel about my life at the moment, so I thought it was cool how it hit my feelings on the ...

Hey There! I really like the way you've opened up your story- right away I can sense that the narrator is down to earth and that always helps- especially in ...

Hi there! Wow! So, i haven't read any of your other works, but i saw the spoiler at the end. Its awesome you feel strongly about a topic like this. ...

Hey there, I see that you're new, so welcome :) For starters, I didn't notice any spelling/grammar issues, unless I missed something, so good on you for that :) Secondly, ...

Hey there, First off, it looks as though you're new to YWS, so welcome :D The title popped out at me because I love 'Love Story' by Taylor Swift- and ...

Hey there, So, I think I commented on an earlier chapter of this story that I'd be keeping tabs... and I have been! Holy Moly, let me say for starters... ...

Hey, I liked this- it's a poem that is very sharp and to the point- I happen to be a fan of those kinds of poems. One tiny nitpick: - ...

Hey, So, I just wanted to say that I really, really enjoyed this poem. I could tell by the title it was going to be interesting, and it was! The ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS, first off :) Secondly, I enjoyed reading your poem- I can feel that the emotion put into it was real. I can't see anything that I ...

Hey there, First off, I really enjoyed this poem- it flows quite nicely. Although maybe a little more imagery could be added to it? I don't know, it's just a ...

Hey there, So, first off I'd like to say that I don't have anything to nitpick- it all looked pretty good to me. I really enjoyed this piece; it really ...