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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Moonrider

    Hey Morrigan! This is a great poem. It says a lot in such a few words. I really loved how this poem feels like a story, but also a wish. ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Capsizing in the flow of thoughts

    This is how I feel sometimes too. Thanks for putting words to those emotions. I really like this poem because not only did it relate to me but it transported ...

    Apr 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Meadow Tale

    Hey nollibee! This is a wonderful poem. I like the tone and the voice that you used. I had a few questions: Should marigold in the first stanza be marigolds? ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Josephine's Shadow

    This is a very cool way to think about something that is such a scary topic to so many. It says so much with few words. One question I had: ...

    Apr 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Hold your Breath

    Oh my goodness, this hit me hard. I relate with this a lot. I really liked that you talk about walking instead of falling in love. This approach to love ...

    Apr 1, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: End of the war

    This is so cool and very relatable. One question that I did have had to do with your periods. Is there a reason that you have three sometimes and two ...

    Apr 1, 2020


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