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Re: Moonrider
Hey Morrigan! This is a great poem. It says a lot in such a few words. I really loved how this poem feels like a story, but also a wish. ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Capsizing in the flow of thoughts
This is how I feel sometimes too. Thanks for putting words to those emotions. I really like this poem because not only did it relate to me but it transported ...
Apr 16, 2020 -
Re: Meadow Tale
Hey nollibee! This is a wonderful poem. I like the tone and the voice that you used. I had a few questions: Should marigold in the first stanza be marigolds? ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: Josephine's Shadow
This is a very cool way to think about something that is such a scary topic to so many. It says so much with few words. One question I had: ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: Hold your Breath
Oh my goodness, this hit me hard. I relate with this a lot. I really liked that you talk about walking instead of falling in love. This approach to love ...
Apr 1, 2020 -
Re: End of the war
This is so cool and very relatable. One question that I did have had to do with your periods. Is there a reason that you have three sometimes and two ...
Apr 1, 2020
