Hey , how is it going ? Amazing work , it comes as a total surprise as relating to the title but it was a really beautiful poem. I have to say you have an amazing imagination . The imagery is really amazing and also , it is a really well laid out poem.
I think you can work a little , just a little on your rhyme scheme , particularly in the third stanza . Don't get me wrong but I was a bit lost in the last 2 stanzas. My bad, sorry. Don't change things much though , it's your poem after all.
Truly amazing piece , keep on posting such good work .
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