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Thank-you for your help Kamas. Just like to say something though - u said, 5 - you forgot a 'the' between until and morning. If you read that part again ...

Thank you for your reply, this is only the first part of this story. It is describing the atmosphere and where she lives and what its like to be where ...

Yup i will post a little bit more soon.

Wow i really liked this. It described lots i found it captivating. Can't wait to read the rest i really want to find out what those guys want with Noah's ...

Yea she was kidnapped, hence the title called "The Missing" I only wrote out a little bit last night on the comp but will write more soon.

It sounds a bit like Twilight!?

Thanks for your review, i have read it again and there is some errors which i will fix. :)

Wow! i don't even know what do say. That was amazing! Gold star! :)

I don't get it!

Wow! Thats is very describtive and gives a GREAT picture in my head!! The way you described the colours she saw and the fire burning her was Great Well done ...

Forgot to give you the star here you go! Oh and by the way why were they laughing at a funeral?

Does anyone want the next chapter?

Okay i love it, it is really gripping and it makes you want to know what shes done to make everyone hate her so much! Love it Please keep writing ...

Welcome to YMS I really liked this story, i don't know if you were going to carry on with it? But i think you should as i found it gripping ...

Hey me again, i really LOVE your storys you are going to be a GREAT author with books in librarys everywhere one day. I LOVE this it really is great. ...