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Awwwwah

I really liked this! Post more soon, please PM me when you do! Wait, is there more?

Just a quick note. Where it says that he handed over a ten dollar bill that should say twenty. :)

Oh my gosh!! I LOVE it. Post, post, post, more, more, more!! :D

Thanks for the review :) I know what you mean with the mum thing. I was thinking the same thing when i wrote it. Also, i knowsome things said in ...

I really liked this. But is it going anywhere?

Like, like, like, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!!! This was just totally awesome. I can't see anything wrong with it :)

Oh. My. Gosh. Your story is so extremely sad! You have great emotion in this and i love it :)

Still very good (: LIke, like, like.

WOW! I Love it. Please, keep writing! I want to know more :) Born

Hey :) I really liked this. It has pontential to go somewhere. But maybe lengthen it some more.

I don't have any nitpicks. I love this! It almost had me in tears. It was just amazing! Awwwwwwah D: Born presses 'like' :)

I really really liked this :) Great work. The only thing is, why are they seperating?

Oh right! I get it now. :D PM if you enter another story, i'd love to read what else you have written.

LOVE the last line :D!! Born presses 'like'.