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Dear Swavvy123, Thank you for the review! I've been notified several times about the "drunk so fast" and "quick transition" and I agree it's definitely something to fix. I'm hoping ...

Dear Pentavalence, Thank you for the review! I've received other feedback about the "suddenness of the dad's actions." I will make sure to balance that when I make an edited ...

Dear 20JPorter, Thank you. I hadn't looked at it that way. Thank you for the insight! I'll be sure to keep it in mind when I do my editing! (This ...

Thank you! I'm making a "MINTER - Zero (After Editing)" where there will be more previous scenes to what is seen here, and there will be more information gathered about ...

Happy to hear!

Dear MissGangamash, Thank you for the review! Definitely includes some pointers I will be aware of in the future! This is only the first draft. I will be editing later ...

Dear Lau, Thanks for the review. But, in reply to your questions and suggestions I must say... He's not my fiance, just an anniversary present. --> we are dating, but ...

Spreading smiles since 2001 :) or at least attempting XD

Thank you! Although it occurred to me that the little wolf wouldn't be able to bring down a deer, I still find it a good feature to put in. Especially ...

Well it's an introductory poem to a novel. So, this isn't a poem on it's own, it has holes because they are supposed to be filled throughout the story. I ...

You could think of it as just a simple order or list of things that made my "epiphany" occur. How I said "passionate" about making characters real, and "passionate" about ...

I like how this is written. It has an interesting rhyme scheme and I like the way it falls together. I enjoyed reading this. It sounds like you put some ...

I also think that the way you put "smilin'" and "sayin'" instead of "smiling" and "saying" (etc) is a good way to show the reader or listener how you see ...