bluewaterlily

To anyone reading this poem, or trying to, I am very sorry about the structure!

Thank you> If you want to see what the real formatting is you can check it out here:

Sorry about the format of my poem. I am trying to fix it, and in the process of having a moderator help me fix my poem. This was not intentional, ...

Beautiful poem! It looks like the reviewers covered all the nitpicks so one tiny thing left to say: "That keeps you both arm and grants you a smile in return." ...

Love the imagery in your poem, especially the description of "strands of sea and sand." Great poem!

I just posted my poem again, in case you are still interested in reading it

You are the bestest sasseh glasseh person ever < 333333333

Loved the ending Solvy! =O Very creepy and freaky. Loved the ending! I can't believe you wrote this! But this was awesome! *high fives* My only suggestion would be to ...

This is beautiful and I think it is perfect the way it is.

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. :)

Soooooooolvy. I know this is a long time ago when you when you wrote this poem. But I just want you to know that is really beautiful and sweet. Keep ...

Beautiful Solvy. Keep writing! < 3333

Great poem! ^^

Thank you so much for the review catslikebooks2. :) Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Thanks so much writingmyheartout. :) And I agree 100% that it can be interpreted many different ways. :)