bluewaterlily

Hi, Tanya. Here is your review as requested. For a full precious moment, she inhaled the salty smell of the ocean, tilted her head back and let the breeze cool ...

I liked it. The emotions were good, and the flow seemed all right. Though there was one thing that confused me. Is this why peace, is like a myth be ...

Hi, ScarlettFire. I'm going to be reviewing your poem today. Cool user name by the way. Now onto the review. Storm A brilliant sun with skies so blue, The day ...

Hi. borntobeawriter. I'm here to review your story. Maya ran, branches slapping at her face, bushes snagging the soft cotton of her long white dress, heartbeat echoing the sound of ...

Hey, kogarasumaro143. Here is your review as promised. Firstly, I would like to say that is an awesome book cover. Now onto the review. Sitting firmly like a Tudor in ...

Hi, kogarasumaro143. Here is your review as promised. Thinking that I am just a “ just ” This sounds a little redundant. I envy more her best of friends, This ...

Hi, kogarasumaro143. Here is your review as promised. Darkness is only a vivid illusion, Nice way to begin the poem! It was interesting, and made me want to read on ...

Hi, kr1117. here is your review. Sorry for the hold up. Luckily, it wasn’t to cold. To should be too. “You can sleep, if you want . ” I offered, ...

Firstly, welcome to YWS! I'm bluewaterlily, and if you need a review or help with anything else, send me a P.M. Today, I'll be reviewing your poem. Here we go. ...

I like this poem, very interesting. I've never read a poem from the perspective of a dead person. The descriptions were good, and so were the emotions. I have nothing ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. Your poem was good and it had a good theme that was conveyed strongly. Your poem also had a nice ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your poem today.The emotions were conveyed strongly in this poem, and your descriptions were nice. However, the flow seemed a little choppy which ...

Hi, kr117! bluewaterlily here to review your story. I felt grief for the poor civilian who stumbles over the scene, having to witness my destruction. Stumbles should be stumbled. “You ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. Girl: I would love to be a fish, And swim through all the seas! Or be a bird who flies ...

Hi, I'm bluewaterlily, and I'll be reviewing your story. Thomas the footman could do his job and I rolled out onto the grass. There should be a comma after and. ...