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Hi Sol. :) I saw you posted a short story and I'd though I'd review it. It's okay, breathe, just breathe . I think to myself. That period should be ...

Hi Leanne. :) I just wanted to say I liked your poem. I just noticed one little error. Way to stubborn too obey Too should be to . Other than ...

Hi, Ish. *waves* Because hearing butterflies roar I didn't really get this line. Clarify please. And the oddity of the valleys above the hills, and the hills above the mountains ...

Hey, Sol. It's me again. You can't get rid of me, can you? Oh, hi. Just another poem about... I dunno! But...Oh, well. Enjoy it! Is this a nightmare or ...

Hi, Sol. *waves* I wrote this at 1:00am yesterday... I was like half in limbo and I couldn't sleep so... I don't know... LOL Lying in the dark Drowning in ...

Hey, again, Missy. Here as requested. I thought bemused and annoyed as I looked no more than 5 feet to the right of where Emmie's hands now pushed and shoved ...

Hi, Missy. :D Here as requested. I could hear only the crunching of the dead leaves beneath my feet and the wind howling in my ears as I sped along ...

Hi, Toe. Great poem. You kick butt with poetry. Don't let others convince you otherwise. Looks of jealousy and hate thrown around, Maybe it was just be, but this line ...

Wuuuuhooo! Click like if...well, if you like it! xD That poem down there kinda sucks but I was mad then and it made me feel luck so I opened chrome ...

Hi, Dragon. I'm not a very good poet, but I get strange blurts at night and I have to write a poem. Just to let you know,I've read you're poetry, ...

Hi, Dragon. Great poem, and don't worry the ryhme scheme wasn't messed up. It could usea little tweaking, but it's not bad. ok, I know the rhyme scheme is messed ...

Hi, Katie. :D Much better job, now onto the review. I let Lyra leave, the door closing softly behind her while I pick at my food. In almost a state ...

Hey, TheTruthLiesWithin. Firstly, awesome username, and I have to say the title certainly caught my attention. Dark sister, Come to me tonight. The wall can be overcome easily; My blood ...

Hey, Rascallover. I'm here to review your story. She mutter a grunt of discomfort as the test began. Muttered should be muttered. His white hair covered his head, and his ...

Hi, kr. Here to review your story. Firstly, I must say this is one of your best chapters yet. The more I read the better Elle gets, and the more ...