bludragon525

Wow. That was... fantastic . I could almost see the girl taking the pills at the end. But oh no, mother, two does not suffice. I'll try three, I'll try ...

Hey! I liked this. Both the content and the idea behind in was fabulous. You need a little punctuation to help the poem flow a little bit more, but otherwise, ...

Hey!!!!! At first glance, your poem shape looked it was very random and had no point. And then, like Rachel, I realized that it was shiver. I was confused by ...

Hey! I liked it. I guess that's all I can really say. You had a few typos, but nothing too serious. those still frames .. I was a little confused ...

Hey!!!! Great poem! I loved it from the very first line. I found nothing wrong with it; your grammar was good, except for a few "I"s here and there. Obsessed ...

Hey!!!! First off, I really liked your poem. This poem portrays several feelings, all of which links to one another in some way or another. I could relate to it ...

Hey! Darko basically said everything for me. When I kiss you, It doesn’t mean, I love you, It means: Never let me go, I care so much for you, I ...

Hey! When I was reading your first stanza, I had absolutely no idea where you were going with this. But then I read your second stanza, and I loved it. ...

Hey! Like both darko and Tayla, I didn't like your repeating part. It sounds..... insecure, and I would suggest taking it out. Men move hurriedly, racing the sun to the ...

Hey! Wow.... that's all I can really say. I felt myself reaching out to the narrator, it that rarely happens in poems. Great job! but where were you in my ...

Hey!!!! Okay, I don't mean to be harsh or anything, but this... I HATE THEM. ... is the worst ending in the history of endings. I'm sorry, but this is ...

Hey!!!! I liked your story. It has a very good plot. This just wants me to read more about Lady Wolf and her companions. Um, I thought the description of ...

Hey! Okay, first off Hades isn't really considered an Olympian. The twelve Olympians are Zeus, Hera, Poseidon, Dionysis, Apollo, Artemis, Athena, Hermes, Ares, Aphrodite, Hephaetus, and Demeter, I thi

Hey!!!! Great start. Your plot is fascinating, and I just want to know more about Isaac and Jake. “What?” He asked, amazed. “I think you heard me,” I answered. “You ...

Well done! *claps* I've never been pulled in like that in the first sentence. Maybe the first paragraph, but never the first sentence. Great job! :) I loved your characters: ...