bloodybelle01

no problem!

Yeah, Beauty and the Beast is on my list :)

Thank you! That's an interesting idea... I already plan on rewriting this without the beginning and including some more details but maybe I'll do that too, or maybe I'll do ...

No problem :) P.S I meant put a line (-) over the e.... in case you were confused (look at Shakespeare's literature and you'll see what I mean :)

Thanks. I think I'm going to rewrite this one... Hopefully it should be better!

It does seem a bit sudden, doesn't it? And it did.... I'm being sneaky here.

Thank you very much! And sure.

Okay, there is already a second chapter... could you see if there are any negative traits coming through there? I will make sure to put these traits in the 3rd ...

I love them too! I will write some more, I'm going to do the Little Mermaid next. You have anything you want to see? I wasn't trying to make it ...

Okay! I'll see what I can do :)

You're welcome!

No problem, you're very welcome and thanks for the clarification :)

No problem :)

I like how you capitalise the 'Can You Hear Me' and you have very beautiful language- good use of adjectives :)

Okay :)