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Re: The All Mighty Telephone
I forgot about this poem. It's been so long..... Any more comments?
Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:16 pm -
Re: The Goodbye Gift
Hi everyone, I decided to bring out this poem one more time to see if anybody else wanted to comment on it. I love this poem and I hope you ...
Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:25 pm -
Re: To The Stars
This was great! Wow I loved it. Please keep writing.
Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:16 pm -
Re: The Point To Silly Dreams
Good job writing this. I enjoyed reading this very much. Can't wait to read more of your works! :D
Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:11 pm -
Re: Mutants Chap 1
I love X-men!!! I liked this. Good job.
Tue Apr 29, 2008 5:56 pm -
Re: How Not To Make a Human
This was cool. I really liked this! Keep it up!
Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:48 pm -
Re: Emo Poem
The whole poem was redundant to me, "She touched the dead body." "The face didn't breathe." I hated this. Other than that the poem was okay.
Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:45 pm -
Re: America is the world
Okay, but when other countries get into trouble who do they usually run to? I think America......
Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:41 pm -
Re: Life's Crying in the Corner
This poem was okay like every one said. Anyway, welcome to YWS and I hope to read more of your works.
Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:37 pm -
Re: America is the world
True, but every country as it's ups and downs. That doesn't mean the country isn't less great.
Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:23 pm -
Re: The Judgement
I'm online! This was an okay poem. Keep up the good work!
Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:42 pm -
Re: Dreamland
Cool poem. Keep writing! :D
Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:04 pm -
Re: America is the world
It was good. I don't think America isn't that great, but the poem was okay.
Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:01 pm -
Re: Black Cloud
Ooh I liked this. "I am the black cloud". Love this saying! Great job.
Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:35 pm -
Re: M&M's
I liked this poem! Adorable, just adorable! Nicely done! Great!
Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:56 am