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Thanks Kelsey! :D

Oh, sorry Silly. I think I know what you mean. I don't think there is one.

It doesn't have a rhyme scheme because it was a free verse poem, Silly.

If I had wrote this I would had revised it. But, I'll tell him what he needs to work on. Thanks for reading!

Yeah Emma, we do keep calling ourselves "niggas" to each other, which it's sad. My school and neighborhood is all black (including me) and we use that word religously. And ...

Haha. Clever. i like it

Thank you all for your comments.

This was a very great poem. Keep up the excellent work. I would love to read more.

Love it! Keep writing. By the way, when are you coming back to Banneker?

I wasn't talking about you Azila, I knew you got it. I was talking about other people who read it and didn't get it. And to MadHatter, a used nigger ...

I'm surprised that a lot of people get the joke. If you don't get the joke, read the last 2 lines again.

Thank you for your great feedbacks! :D :D :D

One more semester for y'all! Then Class of '09 is takin' over!!!! :D :D :D

Thanks you two. I will try to write more sonnets and hope to get better at it. :)

Thank you all for your wonderful critiques. I really apprioate it. I admit that it wasn't my best work, but hopefully I will get better. :)