blacktiger3915

Welcome to young writers' society! The poem was quite good. But I have to agree with gryphonfledgling though. I can't believe that an eight year old girl could say this. ...

Reading this made me feel like I was reading an extremely long text message. I got what you were saying, but....... I agree with the others. Keep up the work ...

It was ok. Don't ever apologize to the readers about what you think about your poem before hand. Let them make their own predictions. Anyway keep up the good work. ...

They all took the words right out of my mouth. Serious editing is needed. I was so bad that I can't tell if the story was good or not. I ...

Hi Jomel, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I liked the rap, but I have to agree with Alainna. It was a little all over the place, but it ...

This was a great poem. It really got me thinking. Sad, so sad. :cry: :smt010 Keep writing!!

I love how you describe things. I really like this story. See you and don't get mad at Patterson. Just poison his food! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Forget them! People can read it. They know that they won't have many books in high school and college that are double spaced. So they can get used to it. ...

Don't you hate when people re-write your poems or stories to edit them because they think their way is better? :smt013 But, Anyway, I enjoyed the poem. TGIF!!!! :smt020

This poem kicks major but! I love it! Come up with more stuff like this! :lol: Please do not curse on the forum! Thanks, Suzanne

It was cute. I remember when I was 11, 6 years ago. Anyway, that's not true. Just because people are older, doesn't mean that their poems are going to be ...

Glad you're back! :D :D :D

I like the poem.....little bit of spelling errors....but spell check can help that. Anyway keep writing! :) :)

Damn, that was deep. Too deep. Loved it :D :shock: You should write more poems.

liked it! Keep writing. :) :) :) :)