Just my random thoughts

Ok.. I know it's kinda lame to submit something like this

But then again I couldn't find a better place to ask for help=P

So... I don't know it's asking too much of u guy's favours

but if any of u r so bored u and wish to read this

please please please critic on it

and btw, I know it doesn't make sense gramatically

and maybe there are some spelling mistakes

but if u do read through it, can u critic it

and tell me it's garbage or not??=P

also if it's possible can u kinda get main points out of it?

cause I'm utterly confused right now and dunno what I'm saying=P

Thanks if u do get to read it, and please critic it

ooo btw I know it's kinda garbage so please don't be generous

I'd rather hear what u really thought of then to be assured:)

Thanks

[pre]it seems like u've changed

we cannot communicate together

or is it me, being the close-minded

have turned away from u

I feel so lonely, near suffocation

trying desperately to relate to u

but I just can't seem to be able

and everytime i get further away from u

I can't explain what's inside me

but it feels like it's gonna explode

somehow I hav to let it out

in immature writing I try to calm myself

when my vision to my future suddenly reopens

to show nothing... nothing more than a blind

fantasy, a dream not worth of dreaming of

but then again u make me smile

my brain gets filled of hope that maybe

ur not gone at all, maybe it's just me

startled by sudden changes like an orphan

out on the streets, yes that must be it

but what use is it? when I cannot change the way

I feel about u and myself, and really

all I can do is to blindly believe

in something called fate, or the intricate feelings

between me and u if they ever existed

now I know y it's hard to believe, because

to believe means to give up, to be left alone

vunerable standing by myself, waiting for a person

someone that could come and help me, or not

with all these thoughts in my mind, I still cannot find

what went wrong between us, and somehow our bond

broke away, and what left meaningless

can we go back to the times? the times when we

were bonded together by feelings even stronger than love

but again, the times might not have existed

maybe it was all my hallucinations, and my own decieted

mind translating the easist motions to feelings that

never was comprehended...sigh

what use is this, when it's only me

and u r already so far away, too far to start over again

this writing I guess will be just a useless sigh

of a broken-hearted[/pre]