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Hello, I'm Brooke. I saw that you are fairly new so I though that I would introduce myself. This poem was very good. It was enjoyable to read. I like ...

AAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! I loved this poem. It was soooo sweet. I think I like the night time way more than I like the day time. This poem reminds me of my ...

Hello. First off, I would like to say welcome to the young writers society! My name is Brooke aka blacktiger. If you need any questions to be answered or just ...

Oh my goddness! This poem was posted almost two years ago! Who dug this up again? :? I never read anything from Incandescence. I'm mad because he writes beautiful stuff ...

Wow. Nice. First off, welcome to the young writers society! I'm Brooke. Nice to meet you. (I saw that you were a new member) :D :backtotopic: This poem was sweet ...

This was a sweet poem, but I was thrown off alittle because of the rhyme scheme. Like somebody else said before, keep to the rhythm you set at first. I ...

Wow!!! Just Wow! I really really really enjoyed this poem. Wow..that is all I can put it. When I was reading this, it made me think hard and long. When ...

Hi! I'm Brooke aka blacktiger. I just introduced myself because I never seen you before on here. Welcome to the young writers society! Great to have you here with us. ...

This poem was very enjoyable to read and was very good. It had alot of passion and feeling in it which makes it nice to read. The row of periods ...

I'm sorry to be a stick in the mud... but I thought this as an eye sore to read. Not the writing, but the structure, the puncuation, and the capitaliztion ...

I really want to hear the beat and tune to this too. I liked this song. Like the othes stated, it was a little too repeative. I don't think you ...

I agree.... even though I thought this was enjoyable to read, I believe that this will make a better poem than a song. To me, the person in this song ...

What?????!!!!!!!!!!!!! I totally disagree. Rap has nothing to do with gas prices, world hunger, or anything else! The government controls these things and mainly tax payers. Rap is music. Just ...

Wow...... well, the others already said what was needed to be said. I shall not repeat. This was terrible. You must really like chat room and/or text talk. It's in ...

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHooooooooo, I like it. The song reminds me of the play "Rent". I liked that movie. Anyway, the song sounds like it should be sung on Broadway! Good job, but ...