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Whatever man. I didn't put any REAL thought into this. Pretty much it was just a thing I did that I felt like posting, just for the heck of it. ...

Oops, yeah good point. And It's for the play, unfortunately...

Sorry, but Brutus and Cassius were brothers. It says so in the play. Actually, they were half-brothers (Cassius was married to Brutus's sister) but in Rome that was pretty much ...

Yeah, well in my defense poetry is supposed to leave you hanging, isn't it? You're supposed to think about it. Sometimes the best way to get attention is the title, ...

Ah, OK sorry.

This haiku IS 5-7-5 actually.

Thanks, I'll remember that.

Thanks, captain.classy. I'm not a poet, obviously, so I appreciate anything that will make my poetry better.

Wow! Thanks for all the reviews! I'll be sure to post the first chapter up soon.

Meh, not as funny as the first one, but still pretty good. You missed some important deatils that would have been funny to add. Like when Mace beheads Jango. Yeah, ...

That was HALARIOUS!!!I meant to spell that wrong, yes... That's pretty much Star Wars I in a box. Good job! I love how Qui-gon called Maul a noob... n OMG ...

Wow. That was really good. It didn't really seem to hit me though, as deep. If that was what you were aiming for, well... I hope you read my work! ...

i edited this story. Pay no attention to the first comment. Unless you want to see every single detail of my other awful, unedited version and why it was so ...

I edited this now using the help you guys gave me so, for other readers, you might not see the things being commented on! Just to clear up some confusion!

Okay , thank you.