blackmist_riverfrost

Myself, personally, thought that the bolds and underlining brought out the emotion in this very poem. I can tell that you, or someone you know, have written this from experience. ...

I like your poem very much but there are a few things I noticed and I have fixed the in bold. On my Own I am not afraid to be ...

That poem was very interesting. I could really see someone doing that. I loved it and I think you should write more poems like it. You are a brilliant writer ...

Ok, so before I review this peice I must say that I do like your work. It is catching and interesting but there are a few things that I noticed. ...

I thought your poem was lovely but: [quote="elephantwalrus]A Mother's Song Her hand rests softly like the whitest pearl, A gentle gem pulled out of raging seas. While sleeping, she’s the ...

I thought it was very nice, but the different lined ways, is that on purpose? The foreboding clouds rumble. Mana from heaven. Other than my question about that, your peom ...