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Re: The first job
Hey Dragon! I'll start off with a belated welcome to YWS. Hope you like it here. Alright, I love bank heist stories! They are filled with so much action, cool ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Chapter one of complications- Illogical Desicions
Hey Moongoose! Alright, Star Trek fanfiction. This is new territory to me. I was never much of a fan of Star Trek, I always thought it was campy. That is, ...
Oct 30, 2013 -
Re: Undecided Title :)
Greetings and Salutations Emjay! I'm here to attack the first chapter of your novel....with harsh words and lots of exclamation marks!! Fine, I admit, that second part isn't true. But ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful Lights
Hey Emjay! You know, as I keep returning to your works, I realize I might have someone to put into my favorite YWS members folder. Namely, you. I love how ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Safe And Sound Part 1: IKEA
Hey Mandrake! Alright, I was looking forward to your Safe and Sound series, and here it is a day earlier than expected, nice! Well, I'm going to be frank here; ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: Alone Among Ashes
Hey again Emjay! I liked your other story, and now we have a slightly larger one. Eager to see how it fares. Okay, as I read more and more from ...
Oct 23, 2013 -
Re: Etienne
Hey emjay! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here. Alright, I'll be doing a quick review here, as its quite a short story and I don't ...
Oct 21, 2013 -
Re: It’s about time
Hey rotom! Alright, science fiction. I love science fiction, so lets see what you got. Well, you got an interesting setup. Its not too original, but it gets the reader ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: I Cry When I Laugh
Hey Mandrake! Need to do a quick review here, as this was hilarious! Your crazy stories are among my favorite on YWS. You again write good conflict and story sparked ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 1 & 2
Hey Raabia! I'm always up for some horror, but sadly, I rarely see any one YWS. So this is good! However, oh man, this was hard to read through. Your ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: A Heart Of Secrets
Hey Ms. Salvatore! I actually reviewed your only other work way back when you joined, it was among my first reviews. I'm glad you're back, now lets see how my ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
Hey Mystery! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here. You want to know one thing I have learned during my time on YWS? Whenever somebody writes ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: My Own Swagger
Hey Mandrake! It's been a while since I reviewed a work of yours, so its time. First off, even though I love your ironic series of works, writing with weird ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Joke's on You
Hey Maggie! Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy yourself here. Alright, I love humor stories and having a good laugh, so of course we need to check this out. ...
Aug 11, 2013 -
Re: Preventing The End Of The World iii
Hey wholesome! Alright, while I'm going to shy away from the second person POV, I will still say there is a reason why it's hardly used for fiction: It doesn't ...
Aug 10, 2013
