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Hey Cesare! Back for your tenth chapter and a quick review! Alright, this chapter was a bit weird. I'll go into more detail as I go along: Nadiya ran over ...

Hey Cesare! Chapter nine, here we go! Getting closer and closer to the end now. Not much else overall I'm going to mention. This was a pretty well written part ...

Hello Cesare! Back for your eight chapter. As with the other chapters, I'll use some examples and do some quick comments on what I find. I'll just head straight into ...

Hello Cesare! Continuing my way through your chapters. They seem to attrack little attention, and I myself am falling behind at the rate you are writing these. But it's very ...

Hey Noelle! Back for your second chapter. Sorry it took a while to get around to it. I suppose this will be more of a mini review than a full ...

Hello again Cesare! Man, you're really pushing forward with these chapters! Well, I've come this far into them, so I have no other choice than to continue onward. I see ...

Hey Noelle! So I'm going to attempt a review of your first chapter here, despite the fact that you are one of those power house reviewers who I kinda fear. ...

Hey Cesare! Well, I reviewed all your other chapters last time, so I'll definately check out your new ones! In short: Though you continue using a great vocabulary, have very ...

Hey Cesare! Back for, what is so far, your last chapter. This is building up to some cool action, so I'm looking forward to the next installment. But first, lets ...

Hello again Cesare! Back for your third chapter. So lets get to it. One thing I'm wondering throughout reading this chapter: Are vampires now wizards? Because now they seem to ...

Hello again Cesare! Back for chapter two, so lets go vampire hunting! (Or blood hunting, that might be more appropriate.) As with your first chapter, you still have issues with ...

Hey Cesare! I should start with a belated welcome to YWS! I hope you'll enjoy yourself here. Alright, this is certainly an interesting start to a story, so I'll check ...

Hey Adam! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here. Alright, I enjoy reading short stories here, as anything longer is likely to remain unfinished. Your story ...

Hey Smartypants! I'm here as requested, so lets get to reviewing! Well, though having a lot of flaws, this was a terrific first chapter. It is written very well, you ...

Hey Bugs! You should definately continue with this short story, is it really interesting and could become fantastic if you spent some more time on it. What immediately struck me ...