bhoomi5

The comparison of the girl's situation to the butterfly is something worthy of credit and appreciation. They way you have described her starving herself indirectly is very intelligent. her emotions ...

this is so overwhelming, so touching. The emotions just hit your heart and stay. you grow to feel what this is written about- pain and grief. Honestly, even I think ...

I like the way the paragraphs have been distributed and the way they give a particular sound when you read it. The comparison taken, of the girl and the bird, ...

Hey I see that you remembered to distribute your poetry into paragraphs and that is a good thing because paragraphing gives more effect. the hurt is so obvious and so ...

Hey So starting off with the review... there's grammatical mistakes here and there throughout the story, well mainly in the start. I really like the way you have continued the ...

I like the emotions that just spill out of the words straight into the heart, and also the use of paragraphs made a lot of difference. I don't know it ...

Hey I read your poem and firstly, I really like it and the way sentences and lines have been framed, also the words used have a very soothing tune to ...