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hey, i loved this :D although this is not what i usually read in forums and stuff, but well, i loved this. and i can't spot any mistakes... :D i ...

i love the Sisterhood of the Travelling Pants :D And to think that that was Ann Brashares' first novel. i read a book of the gossip girl series, and i ...

this isn't a cliche. i think it was written really great as a short story. i loved how you described how the sister's hair smelt like bubblegum, and the how ...

Did you check and double check your answers to be sure you didn’t make any careless mistakes. I think it should be : Did you check and double check your ...

this really sound like a great book :) she is 15, dates her mother's boyfriend, involves herself in drugs and alcohol, and lives in the 1970s? Wow, i thought the ...

that was totally unexpected! well, that's because the title of your novel is expect the unexpected, right? :D I hope the Marquis and Ellen get together in the end, they ...

it's great :D i read that and the second addition, all america girl ready or not. all of meg cabot's book are awesome, be sure you read them too. :) ...

erm, sorry, but may i ask what is POD? It sounds kind of familiar. by the way, such a pretty girl sounds very nice :) i shall try to get ...

"No Mr Potter." i think it should be "No, Mr. Potter," right? there were lots of mistakes like the above kind. and i spotted a lot of punctuation errors. You ...

this chaper was fantastic! i loved it(: some puntuation errors, yeah, and i couldn't spot anymore mistakes :D i liked how you described the girls' apperance, but it was kind ...

It's a nice little tale. By the way, I like singing too :) , and i am also in the school choir. But my choir was OK, the students sang ...

sounds yummy! although it does sound a bit weird too. i will definetely try that recipe! yum! did you create the recipe yourself? if yes, it's very creative and original! ...

I have been waiting for this book... The school library's copy is not availiable at the moment... My teacher recommended My Sister's Keeper and Plain Truth to us. She added ...

It was fabulous. I enjoyed every page of the last book and I cried for the deaths of Snape, Fred, Tonks and Lupin. I thought that the story should keep ...

it doesn't seem to have a plot, like a real story. i think your style of writing is still OK, but you need to use a wider range of emotions. ...