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I'll get you little turtle you'll make a great soup I nearly died when I read this! I was in a particularly angry mood at this point, so if you ...

Kalliope-I thank you as well! I'm taking some time now to put more plot into the first chapter, because it was very filled with description, and not alot of action! ...

Nichola-thank you so much for all your corrections! I posted the revised version of Like Walden in the same place as the old one, so you can check it out! ...

Ok I really loved the openness in this poem, and the above critique was pretty harsh in my opinion. We're not here to judge this writer's life, just her work. ...

Thank you lilchoma! And I certainly agree, saying those words with a british accent makes them sounds 30.000 times better! I laughed out loud when I read that! Also, I ...

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