-
Re: Fatal love
When you told me you loved me I was so happy stronger word than happy You held me close and whispered in my ear. what did he whisper? I loved ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: My First Real Love (Too Bad You Aren't Aware of It)
I'm in relatively the same situation..just I'm not romatically interested in the guy, he's my best friend. I would avoid adding in personal anecdotes like this: I realize that, as ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Poison Love Chapter 4
Once again, very addicting! Well done! And I love how you mentioned Twilight, very inventive! My room was decorated with dark colors such as purple and black. My room was ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - chapter 3
This is very addicting I must say! As a Twilight lover the whole vampire thing has me hooked! Keep writing!! Here are just a few things I noticed! “1315 Brick ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: A Stupid Plan
I sat on the school bench, staring at the size 12 font unseeingly. My manuscript was paper-clipped to page 37 of The Odyssey, where I decided to place it to ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: A Love Lost
[quote="shoosT"] Looking back on those days, we were so reckless; we lived without a care in the world. Getting drunk in the back of cars at twelve o’clock on a ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Kiss of an Enemy
His eyes sweep over my body, stopping again at my face. My cheeks dance with red. He suddenly takes my arm and pulls me towards him. We were so close ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Ever Since
Of a monster, My fear, Knowing that everyday, It’ll be here. Wow. This evoked so much emotion in me-its rather unfortunate that you blame yourself for your father's passing, which ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Wish You Were Here
Then again maybe it’s a good thing Now you don’t have to see my tears caused by the shit I put up with Now you don’t have to see the ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: The Wind
The leaves laugh as they go to a new place. Can the wind do that for me? Can I blow somewhere else, somewhere where I can get away? I found ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: You're wrong, Teacher.
Be seated, come off your ivory tower. Standing over me at my desk, To gain the high ground. This was my favorite stanza-it shows the teacher's quise of faux power ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Your Lips On Mine
[quote="] You are so provocative, you can have anything. You are my first, and I really don’t mind if you are my last. Teach me how to do it, tell ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: A stand for sorrow
Like a gleaming star unafraid of darkness, A solo fighter defending its ground, I must look inside and find the will, Stand up for my inner light to radiate out ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: I Believe In God
[/quote] I believe in God He breathes a gust of life into me To him, to her, to us I believe that without him we would be nothing But with ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Broken Apart
[quote="emmyc101"]Your face of an angel You cared a whole lot more The way you two are now Is the way we were before Our friendship is ending slowly It just ...
Dec 20, 2008
