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Hey Jalmoc! Bahahahaha! Unlike Alpha, this made me smile at work. It's just so bizarre and random that I sort of loved it. The only major slip up I could ...

Hi Hannah, Finally here for your re-review! I sort of maybe got a little obsessed with getting my Knighthood... Ok, so, you asked for me to point out where I ...

Hi Charlotte Chambers :) Just a little note before I get on with the review! Remember to go help out your fellow writers and review too. I'm sure they would ...

Hey ParisCarter :) I hope you're enjoying YWS! Remember to have a look at other people's stories too...it's a sure fire way to make friends and writing pals! So...onto the ...

Hey haruhi78 :) Hope you're enjoying the site and finding your way round ok. Remember to check out other people's work as well! I'm sure they'd love you for it! ...

Hi Awesomesauce! :) So three little niggly niggles to begin with! I%u2019m still humming though that tune though - You probably only need one 'though'. I would suggest taking the ...

Hey Lycando! :) So let's get down to it. There's nothing particularly wrong with your writing. It flows quite nicely and is well written...I was just left a little cold. ...

Hey adelina! :) Just stopped by to have a look at your work here. There are a couple of little mistakes like - that no matter how hard you work ...

Hi MadisonDennehy! :) Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying yourself and finding everything alright. Let me know if you need any help and remember to have a look at ...

Hi there Jadefox! :) Well this was a lovely piece! It actually touched me and made me think and that's kind of rare to find on this site sometimes so ...

Hey gluaxspeed :) I hope you're enjoying YWS! Remember to have a look around at other people's work and maybe help them out too. I'm sure they'd love you for ...

Hey Holysocks :) Hope you're enjoying the site! Why not get out there and have a look at some other people's work too? I'm sure they'd appreciate it! Now, let's ...

Hey Shadow :) Just stopped by to have a look at your stooooory! My first major point would be that you use a lot of dialogue. Now I love dialogue ...

Hi Hannah! Time to repay some of the work you do around here :) Just before I start I wanted to say that poetic writing is largely lost on me ...

HAI DEMS! *stumbles over story* Ooooh! Let's take a look! :) Nit-picks ahoy! - I think maybe you could stand to join a few words together? Otherwise it feels a ...