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Re: Why do you smile?
This was good, I liked the flow of your words. I loved the word choice actually. You have a gift my friend. Keep on writing through pain, it`s the best.
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: Love
This is good. Something that can really happen in real life but people do not want to touch the subject, good job!
Apr 19, 2013 -
Re: No Such Thing And Never Was
Dude, this is amazing!!!!!! I love it!!! You sir, are a writer. The master at the craft! Everything was painted into my mind. That is serious show not tell work ...
Apr 19, 2013 -
Re: Joyce's Green
I liked your word choice in the story. It made it seem like I was listening and watching these events rolling out in front of my like a story. It ...
Apr 19, 2013 -
Re: As I sit under the moonlight
Beautiful work, you truly are a poet. Keep up the good, awesome work!
Apr 17, 2013