bashland

Hey there pretty girl, I promise I will do my best to review with a minimum of bias and keep my flattery to a minimum. That being said, let's take ...

Interesting start to a poem. Interesting analogy, comparing a mental state to a parasite. Having dealt with anxiety myself, I can definitely see where you are coming from with the ...

I feel like I can relate to parts. The line Drugs wouldn't make my reality go away certainly hit home. However, I'm not sure I understand what you're getting at ...

Why start something that's already over? hit me square in the gut, especially when looking at the meaning of four-leaf clover. At first, I didn't like the flower analogy stuff, ...

I like this, mainly because I can relate. I can relate to the restless nights of just...thinking. Both blissful and miserable, in my experience. Yet, at the same time, I ...

This work ends on a very strong note, in my opinion. The last stanza brings a paradox to mind - the destruction inherent in creation. I think to myself that ...

Overall, it feels like a solid start. Line seven, you're missing a word, I'm assuming a "be". Also, I'm not sure is you need the "Because," at the start of ...

It makes some sense to me, more than I feel you give yourself credit for. Red light at evening, does it have meaning? reminded me of standing on a pier ...

Let me begin by saying I can't wait to read more! You've already brought me in. I really enjoyed your use of colors to verbally paint the scene. I don't ...

Hi Aley, Your poetry is always a treat, even if it does make my head hurt sometimes. I will try to avoid putting words into your mouth and stick to ...