ballerina13

I thought that this was a well worded piece, showing how things do not really go as how you planned them, adn tht you have to live with it. It ...

I have tears in my eyes! Truly; they were springing up when I read it. It was heart wrenching in a beautiful and sad way. The poem showed true emotions ...

I love this poem. It had incredible depth and showed real emotion. It was very nice; it is true in some cases. You have a true talent. I am not ...

Simply marvelous! You put alot more detail into how the setting looked, making it seem making it as if you were really there, looking at the graden! Well done.

Hello! The story sounds interesting but, you might want to add some more detail about the earlier years of your character. The plot sounds very intriguing.

Excellent! The story sounds very intriging and unique. I like it! I did not find any major mistakes, you just might want to read through it and make sure it ...

Hello. Not to be mean but, the poem could be turned into stanza's. Also, the poem was beautiful. It had emotion in it that can connect to your readers, making ...

I love how the words flow, they are not choppy at all. I loved how you described everything also. I did not find manu errors. Following that, you describe the ...

I very much enjoyed this piece. I thought that you gave superb detail and showed the characters emotions very well. It has potential.