ballerina13

I have not read it but it sounds very good. I am interested now. They are making a movie about it. It sounds so sad though.

Little Women for sure. Little Women discusses the truth about growing up and finding your place in the world. The morals are great and true.

I would like to join! :D

This is a very tender subject that you are referring too and it showed in your writing. It showed emotion and depth. It was beautiful yet heart wrenching at the ...

This was... interesting. But there was no real flow to it and the wording was off. It was nice and sweet but, I saw no real emotion or voice in ...

I loved this poem. It was sounded sad to me. There was depth and emotion in your piece that you captured beautifully. There were no major errors that I found. ...

This was an interesting take on a classical poem. You pulled it of very well. It was brilliantly written. It showed depth, emotion and was witty! Extraordinary imagery and word ...

This was good, but I found no emotion in the words. Your flow was good though. There was a lot of depth into the stanza's. My favorite one was probably ...

This was very good. You have talent. There is not much to edit, just make sure to read it out loud. Some parts sound a little off. This poem definitely ...

This piece was interesting. I loved your imagery and use of description. Flawless. I believe that this poem deserves a gold star! Great job. I hope you write more poems.

This piece was interesting and unique. It was quite funny also. The flow was good and you had good word choice to. Keep it up. I give you a gold ...

This was hilarious. A Lot of my friends are obsessed with Twilight series; it gets a little annoying. This deserves a gold star! Great job. I hope you continue this.

This was such a sweet little song, telling about the prime of life. Maybe? I don't know but, this wasa intersting take for a poem. It flowed well and was ...

This was an interesting piece. The title is what drew me in. you pretty good flow until the last stanza. can see that most people got your errors. This piece ...

I loved this poem. It flowed except for the last line. I see that most people had gotten the 'nit-picks.' There is not much more I can say except for ...