ballerina13

Hello!This was interesting to read. It was nicely written. I loved the first paragraph. It explained so much and set the tone for the entire story. The useage of verbs ...

Hello! I must say that this poem was deep and the emotion came across very well. The descriptions were nice and explained the situation spot on. At times, the flow ...

Hello!This was very nice. I love the flow and the repetetive phrases. It had more impact for me that way. The pain and heartache comes across very well in this. ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this very much and the idea is so sweet and charming. I think that it would be better in stanza form, maybe. I like the ryhme ...

This is really well written. It is so cute and sad. It has a sense of nostalgia within it. There is much emotion in such a short poem. It is ...

Hello! I really like this. It has a lazy day, summertime feel to it. The imagery was wonderful. It was bright and bubbly, happy. I did not find any grammar ...

Hello! The concept of this is cute and sweet. But as other members have stated, there were a lot of spelling errors. Always remember to re-read and use spell check ...

I love the idea for this. It sweet and creative. The introduction was well-written. I loved how you said that he was your brother later on. Although, I feel that ...

Hello! This is nice. You depicted the dancer well and thoughtfully. I liked how you broke up the sentences. It made it easier to read.I feel that it lacked in ...

This is one of my first attempts at poetry. Since I have nothing else to say, here it goes: Dark clouds hover above my head They follow where ever I ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this. The message it conveys is interesting and compelling. As other viewers have mentioned, it is spelt "Satan." But! On another note, the flow was ...

Hello! I enjoyed this very much. The theme was sweet yet heartwrenching. The poem was full of imagery and emotion. The story is relateable for many people which I think, ...

I feel that this poem could be more descriptive. Tell us why she is so unhappy? What caused her to be this way? The imagery is nice and the word ...

hello! I loved this. It had a sense of nostalgia. The tone of it was wonderful and the imagery was top notch. Peter Pan is one those stories that you ...

So this is actually kind of a personal memory- something I VERY rarely write. But here it is- I dunno if it fully makes sense to other people though. Well ...