ballerina13

Hello! World War 2! It is one the most interesting time periods for me. Plus I love historical fiction. It is my favorite genre. Anyway, I noticed that the viewer ...

This was so sad. Heart-wrenching in fact. It was beautiful as well though. The emotion throughout the entire poem was spot on. The gradual increase of the climax was great. ...

hello! This was good. It was sweet, cute, and funny. The idea of it all hits home with a lot of writers I am sure. Your flow was nice and ...

Hello! This was nice. I love the fact of it being a mystery within the ballet world. It drawed my attention. Firstly, I like your main character. She seems interesting. ...

Hello! This was really good. I am guessing that this is from Pocahontas' Colors of the Wind? First off, the emotion depicted in the poem is clear and meaningful. You ...

This was good. I liked the flow of it all and the depth you put into the character and they felt and feared the insomnia. I think that you captured ...

This was very good. It was funny how you ended the poem because it was so unexpected. I loved the imagery that you used to describe your MC. They were ...

This was so moving and heartbreaking. It speaks to the reader because it is relatable. Almost everyone has felt like that as they start to grow up. I loved the ...

At the end of the school year, last year, when I was in 9th grade, my English teacher told us we had to answer a single question. I chose to ...

Hello! This was wonderul. It so sweet and simple. It has a nice amount of emotion that shows through with the word choice. It is the perfect lenght. I would ...

Bit belated, considering how freakin' cold it is already. But, here it is. ------------------------- Summer’s gone , and the birds’ sweet calls have been replaced with the chirping of rain ...

Hello! First and foremost, the format that your piece was written in is vey hard to read. Everything is so bunched up and close together that is gets confusing and ...

Hello! This is very sweet and cute. It has a Shel Silverstein tone to it. I do have one nitpick though. I feel that you could add some more detail ...

Hello! This was very well written. It was so cute and sweet. It seemed very old-fashioned. (Which is not a bad thing.) As other users have commented, it does have ...

DON’T CRY CHILD Don’t cry child, Don’t put up a wall. When you are feeling lonely, When they don’t answer your call. Don’t cry child, Don’t run away When they ...