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aaaawww T_T heartfelt! it was beautiful! :D can't wait to read "Yellow"! i suppose that will be a much happier scene? :D i feel so0o0o sorry for Rose! i feel ...

this is cute! :] the saints ought to see this and save you a free seat! :D you're one dedicated fan alright! anyway, it's kind of too short for me ...

short, but well written. maybe you can add more? i'd love to see more of it. :] anyway, i just have one problem: Forever guard You these true vows, which ...

"Love is truly the black of cliches" (hey! that's a new one!)... True, the topic is overused but it's always beautiful. I really like your poem, and I'm particularly very ...

wow! i just love it! especially this stanza: You walk so graceful, Guiltless. You smile so finely, Figuratively. You live so perfect, Peacefully, Placed. opinionated with a tinge of sarcasm... ...

I like the profundity of the poem, and how you gave meaning to mundane things. Although i agree with ash, the manifestation of what these elements actually represent would help ...

very opinionated, well-thought of but a little cliche... i think this would be far better as a blog rather than a poem... :] just needs some fixing up, and it ...

i think it needs a little work with the grammar and other technicalities.. :] add more rhythm to it! :] hope this helps... BIRD CAGE My heart is like a ...

Wow BF! So this must be one of those love letters you told me about? You showed me a few, but i don't recall seeing this one. So Darcy-ish and ...

FamousAuthor: I like how it revolves around giving more thought to such a mundane thing as an old leather binder, then later on denoting it as a source of memory. ...