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Re: Horror: Forever You and I
I enjoyed this piece and I really liked the title it drew me in making me want to read it and thats what I look for when I am looking ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Dream Sequence
Wow this is something different but thats good it's nice to read from a variety of thimgs. You might want to work on character though it could really use some ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Darkness Descending
well done a little lengthy but overall it was good. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Strangers IN The Wilderness
This was well done. I could really use your help with my writing. So far I have been a failure in my writing pieces from what other people have said ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: In the Arms of the Angel: a Short Story
You have nice writing skills. I enjoyed reading this piece I could actually visualize what the individual was seeing. Keep it up. :D
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Stranger
This sounds like it could be really interesting. You did well, other than the minor grammar issues. Hey if you don't mind me asking. Why fantasy? I mean I keep ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: deleted
I really liked this is was really something. Oh and thank you for commenting on my writing it was very much appreciated. I am going to try to work on ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: A Love Letter.
I really enjoyed reading this I was touched by this how many guys would really write like this and really follow through. You should keep up the good work maybe ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: The Wingless Girl
I really enjoyed reading this the title really caught my attention thats good a good story should always catch the readers attention. You have a gift of good writing it's ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Elyse Heights ยป Book 1: Chapter I
I loved the way you described the scenery it really makes you get a feel of the surroundings. Thank you for the positive comment I truly appreciate that it was ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: Accidental Exposure
your writing is really something...I guess it's new to me I've never read a story on something so how should I say? (different). overall it was good.
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Love Affair
this is very well written could you possibly give me some tips on how to make a story one that people want to read? thank you!
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Time is gone, it stops who it wants
this was really good
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
thank you for your comment i'll try to do better with my writing your critiqing is fine don't worry about it.
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: The Forgotten-Prologue Rewrite
um the story was good I just wanted to say thanks for the comment the rest of the story I am working on currently.
Apr 30, 2009