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Thank you!! x)

Thanks!! x) I haven't written anything in forever!! I think I should change that! Thank you so much for your compliments! And Yaah, I see that it sounds choppy, like ...

thanks guys!!! x) And will do!!!

Thanks guys!! : )

Wow! Really nice!! x)

I like it...: ] its really good. I have no critisim at all. But the grammar did throw me off guard at first..then I got the point of it. Its ...

awww...its sad. but its good. The only thing needed to change is the basic capitalization and punctuation. I'm not so sure that title fits the poem. Other than that it ...

Thanks and yaah it is suppose to be bad...lol : )

Thanks Abby!! : ]

Thanks! : ]

Thank you!!! :]

Wow. Nice. Very nice. The whole topic is so imaginative and gently grasping. :] Well done! [: -BG-

nice. :] It (like others saiid) reflects your life, then again all poetry reflects your life (either that or your beliefs). I think the truth of this poem makes it ...

*by THEY I meant your words...sorry i forgot to put that in there...:P

Wow! This poem really grabs your attention. In some parts I think it leaves you hanging but then again poems do that, right? You gave such great description! Very very ...