babygiggles

Hey, Yeah i know so like everybody has practically said, it's good just needs more detail. So i'm going to turn it into a story with more detail. Thanks, for ...

Ok , awesome keep me posted. I'm excited to read them.

Hey Anna, Well if i ever consider, Poetry again, I take everybody's comments under condiseration. And half way through i notice it was hard to rhyme this piece. So i ...

Alexis, It says her thoughts are in brackets. But don't worry i fix it up!!

Hey olive, Yeah i was going to do that just wanted to see if people liked the idea first.

Wow ok firstly i forgot to put cya as c'ya.Secondly Im Australian which is Brittish Accent,So we speak the same.

Ok then. I've seen so many stories where a character says, things that they would say in real life. So what makes mine any different?

Only if you keep it interesting. :)

Hey Sapphire, Thanks for the review.

Hey DarkKnight, I know, Now but thanks. And like i said on the tittle i'm; had not much experience in nor am i not good at poetry.

I'm not trying to sound rude either. Just i only wrote what had really happened except for the way she died.

Hey, Thanks for taking interest in my story. And the dad didn't pick up, Hannah cause he got stuck at work, which it says it in the story.

Thanks for the honest review but, I only have one thing to object is "cya" isn't a name.It's another word for see you later, People say it all the time ...

Thanks dragon thats sweet of you

ok first of all this is somethin ive been though so its a true story so im soryr it's not perfect the only thing which isn't true is my grandmother ...