babydollblues

Thank you for telling me about the question mark, I type so fast that sometimes I miss stuff. Thank you for reviewing!

Yeah, I'm sorry, I should have never done this. I just get really nervous so its a bit tough to write at times and I'm bad with words. This was ...

I used the switching of tenses to create a sense of no timeline, to make it seem very chaotic and crazy, because that's what the boy is feeling in the ...

This poem has a very loving and sad vibe going on. I love your usage of tangible items, especially the cologne and hand. I wanted more of those because it ...

This is a very loving and bittersweet poem. It very much speaks to me as a reader and that is what writing should do. The only problem I really have ...

Yeah, Totally. Thanks for the help!

How do you feel about "Not wanting to become melancholic words forever more." I was also thinking nevermore.

Thank you! I purposely used the word again twice but I can definitely see where you are coming from, I will definitely go back and figure out a way to ...

Thank you! aND oMG I LOVE YOUR PROFILE PICTURE, IT IS MY LIFE

Mocking her work down into purgatory means that they've upset the narrator so much, that her work has gone to a standstill. Purgatory is traditionally a place where spirits go ...

I agree with you on all accounts and I just fixed it! Thank you for reviewing! (I did forget to capitalize the M, shhh)

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Hello there, 567ajt. In the name of the Knights of the Green Room and our Most Sacred and Tireless Quest to ensure that no works go unreviewed in the realm ...

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This really reminded me of a poem I wrote but I like your poem a whole lot better. You handled this topic in a very gentle and melancholic way, its ...

Glad you did!

Thank you for your interest! I was very hesitant in putting metaphoric down, but I think it really showed how hard it hit the narrator's emotional state. It's really something ...