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Hello! I'll be your reviewer, and better yet, i'll be your first reviewer :) Okay, first thing that I had a problem with was the format. It was a little ...

Hey hey hey!! You know I'll go ahead and get straight to the point. This piece is missing some things, nothing major and definitely nothing that a little editing and ...

I loved it. That's all I can say. I was caught up from the very beginning, you really drew me into the story and had me guessing at what might ...

I'm not going to nit-pick or anything since everyone else seems to already have done that, but also because I didn't really think anything was wrong with it. I relax ...

I love the Mark of the Lion Trilogy by Francine Rivers (A Voice in the Wind, An Echo in the Darkness, As Sure as the Dawn). They're set back after ...

Hey, I'm Belle and I'll be reviewing your piece!! There are only a few nitpicks that I have with it. First of all, one thing that really stuck out to ...

well my friend, you've done it again. You have blown me away with your powerful writing and mad skills. I'm sorry that your friend had to experience that, though. Just ...

The guy turned back around with a sour look on his face. I turned my attention back to the movie. It was an indie film about this guy who wanted ...

Okay, I noticed a few minor things here. My computer is acting up, so I didn't get to finish anything except reading it. Other than what I've pointed out and ...

Wow, I liked it and the meaning behind it. You have an excellent vocabulary, by the way and I understand what you mean by being "wordy" i also struggle with ...

I don't very often like to read any poetry other than Poe's. I think this one is very close to his style in "The Raven". I have to admit, for ...

Mom would kill me if she found out i read this, HAHA! But I do have to agree with Cynara. If I had known a person that long and became ...

DDDDUUUUUUDDDDEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's hackin' sick, but in a TOTALLY awesome way! I love gore! The onl

I've read the first chapter already, that's how much I like this story. I was actually waiting for a second chapter to come up so I could see what happens ...

Don't ask why, but I teared up a little before I realized it was a dream. I honestly thought it was amazing. You have nice style and it flowed well ...