averyismediocre

Hi! Thank you again! So, with the rhyme, as I told somebody else, I chose the rhyme scheme of ABCB. It's my favorite rhyme scheme and I use it a ...

Hi, I wasn't trying to do the rhyme scheme you thought I was doing. I made it to where only the second and last word rhyme. This was on purpose. ...

That%u2019s fine. I%u2019m personally working on it too. It%u2019s kind of difficult in some cases.

Oh my gosh my phone screwed that up. Whenever I said the I%u2019, I meant %u201CI%u2019m%u201D and when I said %u201Cdon%u2019t%u201D I meant don%u2019t. I don%u2019t know why it did ...

Hi, I tried making it into stanzas but it immediately shoved it back together when I published it. I%u2019m new to this site and I don%u2019t know how it works. ...

Also thank you for liking this poem!

Thank you! I don't really feel what I felt when I wrote this poem currently. I was in a really tough mental state but I've gotten something better. Thank you ...

Hi! When I said rest, I meant rest as in relaxing. Thank you for telling me about this! I didn't realize how confusing that might sound. Do you think "And ...

This was a very pleasant poem! The highlighting of the words is an interesting choice, but if it's your style then that's cool. The structure is cool but kind of ...

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This was a very interesting concept. I can honestly lowkey imagine them actually singing that. I think my only qualm is that some of the lyrics didn't flow right. Other ...

That was probably the most beautiful piece that I have ever read. I think there might even be a tear in my eye.