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  • Poetry » General, General Re: graduation.

    Hello! Thank you for your review! I guess its difficult to translate, I don't blame you! I've been told off for being too vague before aha. Thank you for taking ...

    Oct 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: graduation.

    Your review system is so well organized what the heck :O I thought the souls were a bit abstract too aha. I'll keep your comments in mind for future work! ...

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: graduation.

    Thank you! I was worried about the abrupt ending too to be honest. I'll keep it in mind for future work!

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)

    I was totally ready to get snubbed by a cat and enjoy every minute of it. This is so much better.

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: graduation.

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: tutorial.

    Thank you! I'll keep the capitalization in mind. I'm very glad you liked it though!

    Sep 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: tutorial.

    Thank you for the review! I also thought the last line was a bit jarring to read, but eventually decided to roll with it and see what happened. I guess ...

    Sep 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: tutorial.

    Hello! God I'm so sorry aha. I realised this poem got really confusing as I was writing it but it was fun so I went on forgetting about the reader's ...

    Sep 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: windscreen wipers.

    thank you for the review!

    Aug 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: windscreen wipers.

    Thank you for the review! I'm a total poetry newbie, so this is really helpful!

    Aug 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: windscreen wipers.

    thank you for the review!

    Aug 31, 2017


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