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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I Heard He Said She Said I'm a Slut

    Hello~ Here for a review! Despite knowing the blatant irony of the Victorian clothing references at the beginning and end I find myself falling in love with the imagery. You ...

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Want to Look Up

    Hello! I'm here for a review~ God I loved this. It's so wholesome and wonderful and aaaaaaaa. The shorter lines definitely worked amazing with the fleeting imagery and the overall ...

    Oct 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: [AD!] Looking For: Poets Willing To Venture On A Thrilling Adventure

    I laughed at this. It's funny! I love hyperbole in poetry. The formatting and the subject (hurting your leg) creates an interesting duality in the poem. The dramatic nature of ...

    Sep 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Arrival (part 1 of the google maze)

    I may be wrong but I have to admit I laughed a little when I read this. Something about the hyperbolic nature of the language in stark contrast to the ...

    Sep 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: hostage

    ugh this is gorgeous. It has a lot of vivid imagery, especially within the first stanza. The wafting of cigarette smoke into headspace is really beautiful. I love what you've ...

    Sep 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Silent Advice

    Hey! I liked this! It's quite comforting. First person poetry isn't something I come across often and it is often jarring to read but the overall conversational tone this is ...

    Jun 7, 2017


Very well; I hear; I admit, but I have a voice too, and for good or evil mine is the speech that cannot be silenced.
— Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness